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Mira sitting down in the park, looking at the kids playing wandered about here and
there aimlessly as she is waiting for her mother who had gone out .Alas that
day she didn't carry her house key.
Feeling frustrated she kept on calling her mother up teem times .Her mother some excuses that we are here or we nearing the place .Mira
lived Swanky building where there were all young married couples having
Toddlers and a lot of would be parents .Seeing this she felt happy for a little
while as always yearned for a friend .That day she saw a man smiling at her
.She too smiled at him. Later on she starts feeling disgusted waiting near flat for parents .She
went downstairs and sat in garden .It is around 7 pm the skies became dark. Then
when light in the park are switched on by the night duty watch men .She sees
Aditya who is in his late 30s playing cricket with all tiny
toddlers .It is so beautiful to see the sight .As tiny tots play with plastic bats
by making others smile .
Aditya: What so funny about me?
Little Aryan: Nothing play no ...... he says irritated.
Aditya: Accha, then are you making faces at me?
Little Aryan: Accha Woh that's because you are the first
person from this entire building to play with us especially me.
Aditya: Why? So
Little Aryan: I am good boy na and help Mira auntie na as
she slight problem in her leg and a man had broken her heart by calling off the
engagement and neither pa and ma are talking with her as they don't like her and her attitude
towards life .
Aditya: Stunned by his answer .What do you mean by that?
Little Aryan: Are Uncle just look at me, my family is a bit traditional
with modern and always my parents told to speak the truth .But one day when I
was playing that blunders group. They were tell lies about Ayesha so I tried to
defeat her stand point but Alas I was removed from the group and other groups
like the Power puff of angels and he-man headed by Anaya and Sid did not accept
me as I spoil everybody secret and top of that Iam Mira auntie's best friend so
they don't take to me much. Bas because of this bloody good nature I don't have
any friends here .But now I am quite busy with activities which my parents put
me in.
Aditya : Hearing these profound words from the little boy is dumbfound .As he sees him throws his bat off on the ground and run to Mira who is sitting all alone by herself on the
bench of the park only to hug and talk
to her . It is only due to the strong vasanas of the child to have such a noble
thought of helping other.
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Finally Aditya who walks towards them is shocked to find
that little Aryan's Mira aunty is none other than his dumped fiancée Mira .When
Mira sees him she is stunned and little take aback... She leaves the place as
her mother had returned home. Her mother gives him smirking looks at him that
makes Aditya feel little awkward. Little Aryan bids his goodbye to Aditya .When
his parents come and take him away from the park.
Aditya feeling awkward switches on his laptop unknowingly to
him tears roll down his cheeks as he felt ashamed of him being an man .Even
though he was a big super hero but he had not right to hurt women especially
Mira by calling off the engagement that day he remembered his a story called
the path of destruction from Ramayana which has been narrated by grandmother
immediately after he dumped his fiancée .But the story felts properly in his current
situation. Because he listens to his
sister who is clever like
Soorpanaeka .As he has always been blinded
by desire for hot bimbos who have fabulous curves and that is reason he couldn't think beyond body level. .
But then upon realizing his mistake he decided that he will
go and ask for his forgiveness and try being an ideal husband to Mira by
marrying her. To go and convince her and ask her for a second chance isn't a
bad idea at all he thoughtfully nodded. Switching off his laptop, wiping his
tears and patting off the dust from the pants .He marches out of the park
towards her residence. He did not wish
to become a like Ravana of this century
as he always wanted to be like a hero saving people life.
Mira stared at sky
blankly and wished for some miracle to happen now as her own brother has locked
them into a room with dare minimum light
along with little Aryan in an unknown place in South Mumbai. Mira shouted at him
and" O dear brother you are sinister and Kamsa for this new era and you are
not going to living long as your own misdeeds will kill you, mark my
words". Picking her little crying
nephew in her arms she tries to coax him by saying some hero will come and save
us but the little Aryan did not stop crying instead the volume crying only
increased by making him tired and
finally he went to sleep with a pale
face. Mira only just wished and hope that someone should come to rescue them from
this unknown place. Tears welled up in her eyes and misted her vision while she
was caresses her innocent nephew who has been pulled
into this for no fault.
Aditya who reaches her residence is stunned to see her
mother in tears and upon enquiring them about Mira and little Aryan whereabouts
they narrated the entire story as to how her brother treated her and took away all
the happiness which she had. On hearing this he feels hurt for Mira and asked those
for forgiveness for his action .They immediately hugged him and "Aditya my
son we have forgiven you as you a gem of person who has a golden heart". Go
and save fiancée Mira but be careful in dealing as she is tough coconut to
crack they said mock grinning at him. Touching their feet and keeping his
laptop bag on the cushion he leaves their residence for this impossible
mission. Before he set out for this impossible mission he had cross the seas of
traffic. As Mumbai is a city that never sleeps and it was peek hour where all
office goers are returning home like flock of birds. Even though he thought of turning
but his guilt for his action done knowingly haunted him. While waiting in the traffic
he remembered all the happening of the day as to how he came to park and how
little Aryan spoke words of wisdom while playing cricket with him, his awkward
meeting with Mira in a strange situation, then he is reminded of a story from Ramayana
and the strange act on the part of her brother like Kamsa. He realized his wait
was over to attain wisdom /to think beyond. Toying with an idea in which is
playing in his mind for while.
He makes a countless number of enquiries regarding
them. He finally reaches the unknown place in South Mumbai. The place is quiet
dark and staircase is dingy. He climbed the staircase slowly only to find
little Aryan and Mira being verbally assaulted by her brother like the flames of fire .After thundering on her for a while
he left the place .Without having any hope for some hero to come and save them. She sat
there while little Aryan was sleeping on the bamboo cot. Little Aryan could understand
every bit of what his father told Mira auntie but he reminded silent. Out of
anticipation he tried to do something. As
they wish leave the place easily. But all his efforts went in vain. Aditya's
arrives at the scene.
Aditya: Hey camp what's up?
Little Aryan: Shrugging his shoulders displayed his
displeasure of being asked such question in the current scenario.
Mira:"Can't you see in what condition we are in" she
sarcastically pointed out to him.
Aditya:'I am going to take you both out from this place'.
Little Aryan: Stunned with disbelief at his words and looks
at Mira with his blinking eyes.
Mira: Ha-ha the so called darpok who broke my heart just for
the sake of the family and their happiness
that you are going save us she exclaimed aloud.
Seeing them playing TT with words little Aryan gets fed up and
shouted "Stop it". Sensing the command in the voice .They kept their
egos aside and starts working like a team so that they can get out of the place.
Little Aryan's father had dishoom fight with Aditya. Amidst their fight little Aryan
gets hurt and is succumbed to serve injuries that worsen his condition. Coming out
of the dark place and Mira taking him to hospital for treatment saw her brother's
swollen face. On reaching the hospital Little Aryan is happy that his wait to
see his father to change for good is over .He now hopes to live a peaceful and contented
life with him. He could see his father getting worried for him
through his plastered forehead. Seeing the other side of her brother, Mira
realizes something and smiles at him.
On her way back home, Aditya asks for forgiveness for his
actions done knowingly in the past and woos her back into his life. Making Mira
his, Aditya feels like as if his long wait for goodness and wisdom to fill his
heart was over .Seeing him smile and remembering the other side of her brother
makes Mira realize that her wait for the lesson in art of forgiving and hope to
live a peaceful life with Aditya was over.
With Lots of Love and Happiness
Sweety
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