Wednesday, 18 March 2015

Wordy Wednesday #9 at B-A-R

Mel felt disgusted at the way her mother controlled her life  She prayed a lot  so that to she  find someone  much  more better than   George her ex fiance .As  she wanted  get   rid of her mother's sermons .One Sunday while going for  mass prayer ,her  eyes welled up with tears as she could  not  handle any more  such  sermons from her mother. Mel felt lost as she did not know  how to react in her current situation. But once she reaches the church, she did not go inside. Instead she straight away went to George's house. So as to knock some sense in him as he had no right to talk ill of her and her family as it was her private matter   and left for home. 

But once Mel reaches home she finds her mother chatting animatedly with George's mother. Mel got so irritated on seeing his mother Suita Auntie who  just had dropped in casually  and she  blasted on her like bomb which forced her mother to throw Mel out of the house and her world .Mel cried a lot and tried to stop her mother from taking such a big step .  For once Mel Without the slightest inkling recognized that in this world "Everyone is self-centred, it's just the radius that differs" .Once she had come  to know about  this bitter fact she didn't turn to see how her felt family. Instead she  looked forward in life. Mel worked hard and progressed in her field passion and became  very  successful. But she had not changed her attitude of sharing things with others. Mel's mother  arrived at her place without having any appointed to ask her money to help her Suita her ex fiancĂ© mother. But one thing she got that she too self-centred like everyone to her radius differs from person to person.

Ma'am there lady who is telling that she is you mother should I send her? The building watchmen enquired.
Yup please send her in Mel said muttering a curse .When her mother came, she felt so ashamed of herself. Much before Mel's mother could brochure the topic she out her wryness gives her a cheque of Rs 1 lakh and tells her that please inform your dear friend Suita to pay it back with 10% within  2 years' time.

A stunned mother could not believes her ears and her eyes .Finally when she leaves her eyes gets misted  with lot of misery .Once she reached her friend 's place she silently kept the cheque on the table ,where John was sitting and working on his laptop. In this unwelcomed house where people were dam self -centred and selfish as they were only concerned about themselves  she felt sorry for Suita as she did not have a daughter like Mel. While keeping the cheque John hissed at her by saying some poisonous things which hurt her feeling badly. Next day John took Mel's cheque and started crying as he missed his chirpy best friend. He knew  that in his house "Everyone is self-centred and it just the   radius that differs ". He thought to himself and decided to win Mel's but how was big question? While  he was thinking in these terms. Here Mel sitting in her office was also  thinking about soft hearted John who happened to George's younger brother and remembering his killer anecdotes that lifted her spirits up .
But today the reality is that she is all alone in this world without any kind of love even though she had gained a lot of success during the intervening years from the day when she was throw out of house by her mother till today. Mel thought as she enters her house. She never tried to catch up or speak her to mother for any odd. John too did not show up or try to contact Mel in whatever regard. The clashes of Ego continue like that for years together.
Five years later John and Mel finally accidently met in one of their friends Christmas party only to surrender themselves to the will of universe


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With Lots of Love and Hugs

Writer Gal


  1. Interesting story. You could do well if you read your words aloud. That helps to bring mistakes to the fore so you can correct them before you post. But practice makes perfect. So go on creating stories from your wonderful mind.

    1. Thank you :-)Seriously Francene I am trying best to improve my grammar skills as it has been years since I lost the touch with the English subject .But through blogging and writing regularly. I am able re-kindle it and improve myself.Thanks for dropping in your feedback. Without your feed backs I wouldn't have the required courage to write more stories .

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